Last week Duffy came to school. Duffy was funny the show was called Duffy in bubble trouble
Duffy was on zoom with his teacher and a person called Jason was pertaining,
He was the principal, then the teacher told them read douche tea spoons
Duffy got really sad then he faked wifi problems
Duffy got a new book and scruffy sanitised and it got all soggy. Duffy was mad and he went for a walk to calm him down and then he fell in a hole.
He found moa bones and Bess becas she fell down hole to Scruffy found Duffy in the hole Scruffy got their auntie and Duffy and Bess got pulled out by a tractor It was really good.
Well done Jacob.
ReplyDeleteI like the re-count.You included some important details that I had forgotten about.
It was funny when Duffy got his foot stood on by the cow.I also liked the bit when the chickens were flying high behind the screen.
What part was your favourite?.
A nice piece of writing. Very well done. You have all the ideas in order and have made it interesting. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteHello Jacob.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.