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Friday, September 17, 2021

adrift

 I started to get goosebumps because the boat was wobbling in the deep sea.  I could hear the sharks coming for me.   I saw the deep sea,I felt cold and scared. One of my boat tyres fell off, but I got it and tied it back onto my boat.   I saw land miles away so I started the engine and headed for land. I was not scared of the sharks any more.                                                          

1 comment:

  1. GEEZ Jacob-you had me worried there for a minute.I thought the sharks were going to have a Jacob sandwich for lunch.I'm glad that you managed to get the engine started.What was wrong with it?.
    Have a great weekend and I'm glad that your'e ok.

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