I started to get goosebumps because the boat was wobbling in the deep sea. I could hear the sharks coming for me. I saw the deep sea,I felt cold and scared. One of my boat tyres fell off, but I got it and tied it back onto my boat. I saw land miles away so I started the engine and headed for land. I was not scared of the sharks any more.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am year 5, and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Friday, September 17, 2021
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GEEZ Jacob-you had me worried there for a minute.I thought the sharks were going to have a Jacob sandwich for lunch.I'm glad that you managed to get the engine started.What was wrong with it?.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend and I'm glad that your'e ok.