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Thursday, August 12, 2021

my hook

On your mark get set, bang ! 42 shotos out in front and he jumps over the ninth hurdle. I need to make it to the last hurdle now.  I need to run to the finish line, but 32 is behind me. Wow, I won.


9 comments:

  1. Nice piece of writing Jacob. You caught my attention, and I love the detail you choose to focus on is the number of the athletes. Ka pai.

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  2. If you won Jacob that must mean that I got second because I was wearing number 32.I should of tried running faster rather than stop to look at all the beautiful fish.
    Well done on winning.

    Keep warm.

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  3. Good morning Jacob.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
    I hope that you and your family are well.
    Take care and keep safe.

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  4. Have a wonderful day Jacob.Take care and keep warm.

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  5. Good morning Jacob.Have a great week and take care.Keep safe and warm as it's quite cold out.

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  6. I am looking forward to seeing what you have been doing over the past few weeks Jacob.
    Have a great weekend.

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  7. How was your first day back at school Jacob?.
    I hope you had fun catching up with your friends.

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