On your mark get set, bang ! 42 shotos out in front and he jumps over the ninth hurdle. I need to make it to the last hurdle now. I need to run to the finish line, but 32 is behind me. Wow, I won.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am year 5, and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 12, 2021
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Nice piece of writing Jacob. You caught my attention, and I love the detail you choose to focus on is the number of the athletes. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteIf you won Jacob that must mean that I got second because I was wearing number 32.I should of tried running faster rather than stop to look at all the beautiful fish.
ReplyDeleteWell done on winning.
Keep warm.
Good morning Jacob.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.
I hope that you and your family are well.
Take care and keep safe.
Have a wonderful day Jacob.Take care and keep warm.
ReplyDeleteGood morning Jacob.Have a great week and take care.Keep safe and warm as it's quite cold out.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week Jacob.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to seeing what you have been doing over the past few weeks Jacob.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend.
How was your first day back at school Jacob?.
ReplyDeleteI hope you had fun catching up with your friends.
Kia ora Jacob.Have a great week.
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